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Thursday, 29 March 2012

Jane got on the bus at 9:00 o’clock. Then, she went to the supermarket and bought a lot of delicious food and some other things. Next, she carried the bags and she came back home by bus. After that, she made the cake but unfortunately, she forgot the candles. She returned to the supermarket and bought the candles and put them on the cake when she got home. She was very happy. The guests arrived at 8pm and gave her a special gift. She gave them some cake and drinks. At the end of the party Jane felt tired and went to bed.
Aminah 

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  3. Well done Aminah, it's a very good story and all the past simple verbs are correct :-)

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